Woah. This is very well put together. Not super my thing but the writing was pretty decent. Got ending ... uh, 15/14, apparently. Intriguing concept. Nice work!
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Many thanks!
Hearing from people who aren't already into hypno is SUPER helpful. That's not a perspective I get very often, and it's less likely to overlook bad writing for the sake of kink, so it means a lot that you still enjoyed.
Doubly as much that you reviewed it at all. I was nervous submitting a super hypnohorny, super gay project to a broad-spectrum contest, so I'm delighted to hear it turned out alright ^w^