Very nice visual novel!
- Innovation – A standard visual novel, but the black background with white sketchy lines is a unique look.
- Fun – Interesting story, and the ambient sounds and music really helped keep me reading.
- Graphics – Nice style for sure. The main menu needs different font and phrase. "NOW LOADED" is an odd way to start. Just show that nice art piece full screen and a nice start button.
- Audio – Nice sounds indeed!
- Polish – Very good compared to most game jam visual novels I see. (most are dead silent or just have a bad music track on loop hehe)
Great job completing a full and fun game! Please check out my game if you like Metroidvanias or platformers :D