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Not bad! The game is anything but boring, though it's not well paced. Scenes and punchlines are not adequately set up and scene transitions are quite abrupt. It's all... over before you know it, each chapter feels very short & fleeting.

Though for a first time work this is pretty good! When the pacing is off it's better to have it too fast instead of too slow, boredom is death, so be careful that you don't overcorrect!

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Thank you for the feedback!