Really short game experience with funny scenes and dialogue. I think the art does a lot here. Their school outfits from that one MV are so well rendered here. The only thing I felt was truly missing was better feedback when reaching an ending. I would read through the text and then abruptly realise that I reached an ending. Like, it didn't feel like I was reaching an ending. Especially with how it would also abruptly put you back at the very start to play again. That sort of UX stuff is important, especially for a VN, I think.
I think it's still pretty decent for something made at a jam though. Good job, and congrats on the submission!