Loved this Liam!
Playtime: 30-60 mins (I spent 60mins, but I was trying to catch bugs)
Best Parts:
1. Culture Notes
2. Cinematography, Noir Style
3. Right amount of "complicated" (I didn't find this demo "needlessly complicated" at all, at least for this build).
(I think I'll also enjoy the Money and Travel systems in future chapters.)
Minor Bugs:
1. Biggest issue for me was the minor misspelling of "小姐" as "siu jei" in the game - as neither Jyutping (siu² ze²) nor Yale (síu jé) spellings were used.
2. Some non-mainstream routes are mismatched, texts misaligned, and RenPy standards overwritten, But nothing major.
I'll send you a full list of feedback with screenshots via your BSky/somehow later today/tomrrow. I also have some longer thoughts re: VA that I wanted to share with you.
