That was a nice short story. Spent ~40 mins with it. I enjoyed the art and the branches (especially the first dead-end ones with De Reemus lying on the ground). Especially loved the random drops of French alongside English.
Some basic UI issues made this a bit harder to play for me: namely the missing AutoPlay and FullScreen buttons (have to squint to play in-browser). Having a Mac Build would've been nice.
Will send a doc with screenshotted feedback and thoughts via instagram messages. :)