A fun little encounter. You had me hooked during the ambush but it then kinda lost the tenseness of the moment. Also, I really like it when stories work the theme in without having characters say it outloud but it was a good submission!
Thanks so much for taking the time to read my story! All good feedback, and I can’t help but think I had my “so what’re we, some kind of suicide squad?” moment in that final part but clearly couldn’t help myself. Great feedback for the future though.
