Really great. I love the brutality of the collateral four-armed soul. I think the tension may have worked better if Othromar was a bit less confident in his ability. The arc is very well paced for a single page.
Thanks, and I appreciate the feedback. You’re right about the tension. I think if I did a full story dive I’d explore the evolution of the character’s ego and maybe a “fall from grace” style confidence shift and redemption arc.
