Really liked the character dynamics and the cynicism of the lead. Great pacing and arc as well. If I could change one thing, it would be to make the kick-to-the-head that Hallisk delivers something less severe! Klimes takes one to the dome and only seems moderately miffed; felt a bit disproportionate. I really loved how you showed the veterancy by Hallisk's wisdom of the probing attack. Good stuff.