Cool track! I think it works well with the premise you wrote, and has a great sense of atmosphere. If I had to give any notes, I think the crunchy sound effects - which I assume are footsteps? - were a little distracting in the beginning. They were a little loud and at times kinda sounded (to me) like someone crunching on chips or cereal, which is a sound I don't like hearing in real life, haha. Also to me the piano at the end was a little claustrophobic in the low-mids, if that makes sense. I feel like I wanted that piano to sound wider and more open, even though I realize it's supposed to sound ominous and forboding. Those are just personal nitpicks, though. Overall I liked it, good stuff.