The font is pretty hard to read, and the web version is pretty laggy. The absence of music is noticeable, especially since it's a game based on ambience and reading. The game is good but needs a bit of polishing and a clearer starting point would be good
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Hello, I must agree with HytreOfeth here. The theme and idea of the game are really promising, the game just lacks a bit of polishing and time. The font is difficult to read and the lack of music is quite noticable.