Thank you much!
I'm really glad I participated here. I really have been quite self conscious about my ability to make music at all and participating in this jam has really been a great vehicle to tell me that I need to write more.
I fully expected to get slammed for quality and writing when entering but I guess I stumbled across a couple things i can be proud of. That plus a big laundry list of what could be fixed and I hope it just gets better from here. Thank you a ton for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed it.