I hope my english level don't make me miss some important details, but the style, music and looping already shape an interesting atmosphere in nice harmony with the text, and you imagine the story naturally.
I think I know what this is about. The judgment at the end of some loops... The concern about defining something or writing well... After some thoughts I imagine a writer trying again and again to write his story, never satisfied enough, throwing fold paper sheets in a bin.
But the first thing I was thinking about aftrer playing was someone overthinking. Trying to reach some truth but losing himself and trying to start back with the will to be concise to feel satisfied to catch that truth.
I see there is one word changing and there is a rip, so I hope I didn't miss some secret path that could lead to an end.