Hi!
I played your game.
The core concept isn't just cool, it's AWESOME. The player is immersed in the Halloween atmosphere from start to finish. Choose of characters where unexpected, but interesting decision. I chose the Maradeur because think he's more active (?). I got a good ending (albeit sad), and next time I'll try playing as the Bartender.
Morality system is good choice for short novel because player can understend which decisions change the plot and which don't.
The control scheme is odd (left-clicking accidentally continues a dialogue).
The interface and sound are great; everything works good! Typing sounds, mouse clicks, etc.
In conlusion: it's good game, and I really enjoyed it. I will be grateful if you check out my VN