Hey Hyberbolero, I love this. You did a very good job! And I love that you started it by humming and then going to the keyboard. I really like your description of your theme! (I forgot to make one lol) 3/4 timing is very good, especially for dance like themes. It is actually the timing I used on my submission haha.
Very good song you have here. It flows well and your mixing is good too. Its not to loud or quiet. Just perfect. Solid work here.