While I may not need to send you guys a comment, I want to absolutely make sure you know how I feel about the demo so far.
Literal 10/10 everything is SO good.
But what I love most of all is the hidden fluff text pieces that have *multiple* fluff text pieces. Not only is the writing excellent and is everything I love in fluff text examinations, but having multiple to browse through helps with immersion and the feeling of examining the environment closer. THere's SO much to examine and I love that.
I also appreciate that the writing is fairly snappy, so it not only gets across information, but also doesn't actively give me paragraphs of windows of text. One of the beautiful parts of multiple examinations is being able to press the button to re-examine as desired rather than just getting stuck in a novel.
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Np. I love it. You did extremely well. <3 Good writing can help bring a universe to life, and writing is more than just text, it's also in the environmental storytelling and how everything is arranged. Everything can tell a story if arranged properly.
I digress though. The fluff text has been incredible and I'm so excited for more.