Ok, at first the opening narrative was really confusing me, but once I read your description of how the "it" units shifts I get it. Brilliant way to make the objective dynamic and stick to the theme. Well done.
Does this have to have only one deployment map? Couldn't it be used with any of the basic 6 maps?
Does the battle need the flood mechanic? What happens is the flood kills the "it" unit? How is a new target unit selected?