I love the overall voice and tone, and just the unique-ness of the setting! I also wrote a detective piece, so we were definitely wrestling with some of the same game design challenges.
If you're looking to tighten this up after the jam ends, consider giving the choice names an extra descriptive word or two.. I got turned around for a bit trying to get back to the window and spun in circles a few minutes trying to find my way back after I got the other thing I needed.
Great vision and execution overall, and great use of Xolo!