Hi
Interesting idea. The fact that it only consisted of two images (at least for me) isn't a big deal considering the time constraints. It worked flawlessly, though. I didn't make it to the end. I eventually gave up. The atmosphere was dark, just as you intended.
Pros: The texts were well-written.
Cons: As you mentioned, some pointers would have been helpful. I ended up doing the exact opposite of what I was told and got frustrated.
Nevertheless, I'm glad you submitted your project and shared it with us.