Hello :)
Thank you for writing in, that part however is actually intentional, but now after thinking about it I will maybe change it, I planned to use the second person, the you form but mixed sometimes with an all knowing narrator, so that what is written is not limited to the MC but I am actually unsure if I did that somewhere else in the story as well. If yes I think I will keep it and just go with the You perspective with some all knowing narrator parts, if not I will change it.
I hope you get what I mean, I am a little tired, thank you none the less :)
