I have to admit, I went into this one on a friend's recommendation after initially assuming it'd be a goo tf story (not inherently a bad thing per sé, just not my cup of tea) but I ended up being really glad that I checked it out.
If I have one thing I'd say about this VN, it's that out of everything I've played so far it feels like it would benefit the
most from being expanded post-game jam; the characters are pretty simple, but still charming and hot enough that you could probably make a good few "episodes" worth of stories out of them if you ask me.
Probably my biggest complaint (aside from typos and the music, cool as it was, getting a little repetitive at times) would have to be the visual department. Usually I wouldn't be all that bothered by using the bare-bones Ren'Py visuals and sprites having limited expressions, but unfortunately that type of thing is a lot harder to ignore when the story is trying to present itself as a "lost episode" of a VHS cartoon series, although I will say that I'm a big fan of the use of sprite transitions and the actual designs of the characters work perfectly as both eye candy and to communicate the general vibe of what their character is like to the audience.
Overall, while I'm guessing that making changes to anything at this stage would be pretty low on the team's list of priorities, it'd be cool to someday see an updated version of it later on down that builds on the current high points while smoothing out its flaws. (and who knows? if we're lucky we might get to see future stories with the cast someday)
also Phase/Swage is top tier ship