Besides few issues with text formatting, the fact there is no choice to download the game and few grammatical mistakes, I’d say the game was quite a pleasant read. The post-apocalyptic story of robots rising up against humans reminded me somewhat of the 1963 movie “Atragon”, where the Japanese fight the Mu empire. The relation is mainly found between attitude of Mu this game’s “Seeds”.
For what it’s worth, I don’t have many harsh feelings. The story achieved what it set out to do. Although I am not the biggest fan of exposition, I’d prefer the background details be told by characters not the narrator, still it I found it pleasant. Thank you very much for this work and maybe in the future upload the game as a zip file?