Glad you find your favorite parts in the story! I spent most of the jam time on the drawings, and unfortunately didn't have the time to implement the multiple choices and audios on the later parts. It would been much better if I had a team to work with.
I know it's doesn't feel like a proper game due to the lack of interactivity and abrupt ending. I might update the game with some screen shaking and proper sfx/music. Though it's quite a miracle that I managed to went this far in the story in such limited time.
Thank you for your feedback!