First off just wanted to say I loved the visuals and its simplicity with its story, and its amount of characters.
And sorry for this I don't want to overstep your creative vision, My only criticism really is I wished T'lyn inner monologues during her sex scenes would be more erotic, even if she doesn't express herself, I would have loved to see the smallest bit of blush but keeping her stoic demeaner. Maybe describing that of course she doesn't understand it necessarily but simply saying in her thoughts that she finds it "interesting" or "satisfactory" of how much she was surprised how pleasurable it was. And yes I was looking forward of her having a pregnancy ending.
I don't suppose could we get a an extended ending or alternate ending for T'lyn by any chance?
Any chance of a continuation or sequel? Sorry I guess those are the same thing lol.
Overall 9/10,