Unfortunately I didn't manage to finish 2nd stage like others. Not sure if it did not register end of some action or there is something specific that needs to be done (I managed to unclip Moom from the PC using my QA powers but still could not find a way to finish the level). If you fix the softlock or add some hints after the jam, I would gladly replay it.
So what I liked:
- The concept itself is nice, a cozy game about cleaning with your oshis. Could be a little bit spiced up with time challenge or with sort of puzzles, like cleaning things in specific order or finding something along the cleaning that helps clean other places etc. But even without it, if you just scale number of objects to sort / clean / fix etc., it could be fine in its own. Maybe even the best on the phone.
- BGM was pretty nice and really fit that cozy vibe so that's big plus.
- I liked the click sounds on Moom and Kronii, it felt satisfying to just click on them, it had that cute vibe with it
- Art of Moon and Kronii, not sure if it placeholder, but if it is, I would consider keeping it like this or only slightly polishing. It fits the silly cozy vibe of the game
What I would improve:
- Definitely have a list of oshis on left or right, so I can easily select them. Preferably with the duration of the tasks. That would be also a good way and easy way of preventing potential softlock when the character clips into the objects or there are some blocking collisions left. I would still keep option to direct click on them because it is satisfying.
- I would change the progress bar into a green checkmark once the task is done so we are 100% sure it did not softlock or something.
- I would add a highlight over something that can be interacted or used by oshi (my theory atm is that mumei has to stand next to that "panel" like thingy in the first room in order to open the door for Kronii, as it did happen for me and I could reproduce it).
So overall there is potential here o7 Either spicy it up a little or keep fully cozy vibe with some cute animations for interactions so it is a satisfying clicker (especially on mobile).