I'll be honest and say the story kept my attention so far into it. The story Isn't anything unique, other AVN's have similar plots in some regard. That said the MC is likeable and I'm invested in seeing how he handles his new life. Some scenes are a bit forced but it is a AVN after all so it's not anything ill linger on. The girls look good as well as the world its self. Last thing and to me being the biggest thing holding it back is the dialog. It needs a major grammar check, it's not unreadable but it does take me out of the engagement of the story. I think having a native English speaker go through it would help a ton not only for grammar but to make conversations more natural.
Rating wise I will give it a 6 out of 10 making it above average. I was tempted to give it a 5.5 but the interactive game play does push it to a 6 for me. I'm rating it against other juggernauts in the space so don't take the rating too harsh. Will be waiting for the next update for sure.