Great art and character designs.
The writing in this game was funny! There were several lines that had me laughing out loud...
"Let me walk you to your dorm....and I definitely don't know where that is."
"For a dream, this hurts like a mother hugger."
"Her succubus in shining latex~"
"...though her nails are a bit uneven and her skin could use some lotion."
I got all the "Great" choices on the first try so I saw the good ending.
The rhythm games were pretty hard, even on easy. I'm not good at four button rhythm games. The "hold" notes use the same arrow image as the normal ones (except with a trail), so I often let go of a note before realizing I wasn't supposed to. I got through after a couple tries, but some players may appreciate a skip option.
Great work! This game feels very complete and skillfully written, which is quite the accomplishment in just a month!