Great job with this game!
I instantly noticed the music -- has a uniquely spicy style, doesn't feel like generic VN music. It sounds lovely.
And the writing is SO funny. I laughed out loud several times. I love Yamaris, the way he talks, and the way he plainly states exactly what he feels. I laughed over and over when he said or thought things like "OMG, he cares about me 🤭" or "Yippee! A compliment!" And his flirting... 🤣 Great back-and-forth with Azylh. I like how Azylh is a bit aloof yet he still makes it clear he enjoys Yamaris's company.
I have a hard time describing why this game's writing was so funny to me, but it's like: entertaining things are said straightforwardly and concisely, at unexpected times, without going overboard or "trying too hard for a laugh". Like when the transition between scenes said "Evening: market...damn, that was a long walk" I didn't expect that. Other iconic lines....
"Where are the recipes? Just give me the dang --- Oooh, he's fine as hell!" (That's such a great start to a VN 🤣)
"Man, these guys stink!!! ... It would be horrible if someone were to accidentally... 😏"
"Apparently his delusions said to buy a lot from me, so I'm not complaining"I am not good at four button rhythm games so I appreciate the "cheat" option. Wish there was a fast forward or "scene selection" option to get the right ending without manually advancing dialogue (and accidentally choosing options due to button mashing). However, the game is pretty short, so it's not a big deal.
I noticed some typos, but nothing major. Although, I was a bit confused where Yamaris got the name "Azylh" from.
Anyway, keep up the good work and thank you for sharing this!