This was a really compelling short story, thank you for sharing! Very interesting concept, a succubus trying to "quit" touch.
I found the music pretty distracting (it was more high-key than what was going on) so I muted it to focus on the words because I was very quickly invested in Eden's plight.
As far as writing, I suggest using full-sentence prose rather than stage directions in asterisks, because the latter makes the text harder to read and feel less finished.
But I want to emphasize that the story and dialogue are both solid and compelling! The two endings really make you think about which one is "better".
Good job!