As someone who usually gets bored of otome/dating Sims really fast, I give you my whole heart and soul. I was never really able to find an actual good game like this where the character has an actual yandere personality. A few things that I would prefer tho is that you can pick your height and body type. Because Ren is really tall and one scene we were face to face? Even tho im only 5'3 😭 And as someone who is a bit more on the chubby side I would love to see a NSFW scene where he grabs my tummy or anything like that. Talking about NSFW scenes, yours are just the most amazing scenes I have ever read. Usually they are extremely short or just straight up boring. Also I thought ren would have been more submissive. When I saw him be a dom I was shooked. I absolutely loved all the details. Oh and maybe some voice acting... I would love to hear him speak and mumble yo himself. I only had the NSFW end till now but I'll be playing it again soon to find out the different endings!!! Great work!!! I'll be following along till the full game comes out !! <3
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Wahhh thank you so much for the high praise and helpful feedback!! ♡
Regarding height and body type: I've made a conscious effort to keep most of Angel's physical descriptions vague so that everyone can seamlessly insert themselves (or their characters) into the narration. So it's safe to assume that Ren would lean closer to you during those moments where he appears taller, and that he'd grab your tummy during the spicy encounters as well! If it helps, I've always kept different physical attributes in mind when writing Angel's characterisation. One of the dialogue lines during the Day 3 NSFW scene specifically mentions that Angel has plush thighs — and there's also the fact that Ren has always liked bodies with more squish to them and soft/plush tummies since the beginning.
Regarding Ren being submissive: I've actually answered this here already, but the TLDR is that the NSFW scenes aren't that imperative to the storyline (which is why I didn't add that many branching options), and also... [REDACTED] isn't really a sub/bottom kinda guy in the first place ^^; Ren definitely is, but he's still adjusting to his new Haruko persona — so it's a little awkward for him to switch dynamics and become more submissive/a bottom straight away. If you're interested, I've answered quite a few submissive/bottom Ren questions on Tumblr as well!
Regarding voice acting: 14DWY is completely free, I don't have a Patreon / GoFundMe, and I don't want to create a Kickstarter for an incomplete game — so I don't really have any means of hiring voice actors at the moment ^^; I did speak about voice acting quite a few times in the past on Tumblr if you wanna check that out. You'd have to dig really deep though ghsdhjgh
Anyways!! Once again, I really wanna thank you for the kind words and for sharing your thoughts on the demo! I'll be sure to add them to my list of potential changes for the game. I hope you have a lovely day ^^
I wasnt saying it was a bad thing he was submissive hahaha xd. I actually really liked seeing a more dominant side of him. And well about the body type, I was half asleep when I was playing it so I didnt pay a lot of attention to small details in the NSFW scenes or just in general. And if you ever think about wanting people to voiceact for you I could try and help you out. I am in too many servers online. And I love to do research so I could even try and fine people that do it for free. (I think my friends might do it for no money too. Depending on the person)
Oh!! Sorry, that was my bad! Someone else brought up similar concerns about the NSFW scenes very recently, so I figured you were sharing the same sentiments ;v;
I also really appreciate you helping out regarding voice acting, but I've already got quite a few voice actors who've reached out to me via Twitter, Discord, email, etc. — and I'd prefer to pay them for the work they do =w= Again, 14DWY is a free demo with no Patreon / Kickstarter, so I have no way of paying for voice actors right now.
But once I'm satisfied enough with the demo , I'll start looking into creating a casting call and reaching out to some of the VA's! So when that time comes, you're more than welcome to direct your friends to it ^^