This was a really fun listen, great job! The drums came as a surprise in the middle of the track, I dind't expect them. Great job!
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I liked your narrative way of composing it, makes it surprising in every change you are making in the track. I think the drums could have used more movement to enhance even more the fighting theme of what you were looking for, and the mixing could get a little more polish.
Great job overall, keep going and congrats on it being your first composition!!!
I had a full smile during the whole track, congratulations. Super beautiful, very well composed, one of the best-fitting ones, and a winner for narration. You were really intelligent in making a full video for it.
If you listened the song without the video however, it still works as a great piece of narrative composition. Fantastic job, keep on keeping on!!!
10/10. I would buy an album full of tracks like this one. you touched a very inner part of myself, as my main genre is funky, so this comes as a perfect track. Not only that, it's superbly composed, the main idea of the ghost singing is fantastic (I'm so SPOO-KY!), it's totally related to the theme of the jam, it's catchy, well mixed and produced, and the outstanding video you did made me really jealous.
Fantastic work, you can have a great career if you keep on keeping on.
I really like the vibe of this track. I think the final quality of mixing the track (specially bass and drums) could get some more work and feel way more polished to make the song feel way better. Nonetheless, great grooves (I love when different instruments don't play exactly the same and create strange rythms, like in the 70's prog), and good ideas!

