i agree, the situation with ann and the charcter going at it and adrian is listening to the door, is kinda hot. Add more different sounds and moans, even if father is imcluded is hot. Also have adrian pankacing about what he can do and make it a random chance of him entering or leaving. Also, dont have to add alot of art, this scenerio out in the hallway is enough. Just add more sounds and add this typw ficture for other pedestrians at tge mall, bar, sex shop or outside park bathroom.
Thought the valentines day seen with anna, and charcter going at it and adrian listening was hot and replay it often.