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Ayo, thanks for playing! My first instinct was that they stole the goods, but it guess they got damaged :D I truly have no idea, and perhaps anyone else has either. I would say that cloning and delivering one would be some outrageous price like 1mcr. My hunch for a plant would be 1kcr a piece, or that's what they would ask for them. Probably the company that hired the crew handles the payment through some insurence, but makes the crew pay with many extremely dangerous jobs. 

Ayo! Big fan of your style and Tidebreak! Used some of your assets here https://doublemonk.itch.io/i-loot-the-teamster
Most likely in an upcoming pamphlet too

Ayo! Thanks for playing, glad you liked it. You are right, it might be clunky in the context of oneshot. I guess its best to turn to 'primacy of action', skipping the 5 if accompanied by the siblings.

Made with exquisite taste! Just great!

Thank you! Glad you like it!

Great and consise character descriptions!

Ayo! I would appreciate any feedback on the stats, for I am unsure are they fitting or balanced

Ayo! No need to delete anything, it's all good.

Thanks for the feedback! I am glad you liked it!

Ayo! Thanks for the feedback!

As just minor review of your review, as you mentioned about other submissions, i think you might get too caught up on the information ordering. I don't disagree with anything regarding the front panels, but the pdf is stand off for pdf and different folds. I think as long as the information is graspable and able to be found, I think the submission is good. In my case there is 4 clear sections on the panels, start might be clunky, but it's not that hard to grasp. Changing the positions would change the placement of the art, that's why the sections are where they are.

Same applies to the page 2. It's unfortunate that it was not smooth sailing, but I think it's absolutely crusial for discriptions and images to be side by side, cos players will jump around. Once this 'disconnect' is cleared, we are all good. I frankly doubt many will have this problem, hopefully not.

I get the want for more clarification on the intentions. I personally am fine leaving it mysterious, only the environment suggesting things. But there is a Easter egg, in case you did not notice. The 7 square blocks next to the rooms are Ai WaitWait font text, that might give suggestions on motives.

Even if I am critical towards some of the criticism, I appreciate that you have written down so many reviews, it is no small task.

Ayo! Thanks for the thoughtful feedback! Yeah not elaborating on the travels am was a choice to save space, hoping the arrows seal the deal. You are correct, let's see if I can spice up the rooms little for possible post jam version.

Ayo! Thanks for taking the time to respond! Sure by all means, any feedback is welcome

Thanks for the feedback! That's a good point, I might want to rethink the wording and look of the related room.

Fintastic job, love it!

Thanks! I love it!