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I very much doubt this is intended, but the intended end of the demo is to show Jackson the first video. And I reached the end. And then I decided to repeat the last day because I wanted to do something else before going to Jackson, but it was too late and he was already asleep. If you then just go to sleep, then the next day starts and you get normal salary but you can't show the video to Jackson anymore. And instead the entirety of act 1 is unlocked. Just normal story progression with goals and new characters and new actors. There are just no assets. But the entire story, just without pictures. I think you wanna do something about it.

I just discovered the visual novel and I love it. Great writing with great good looking characters. I love Tony especially!

I hadn't read the story in quite a long while, but after going through my library I realized we got a new update a month ago. I wasn't remembering too much of the story outside a couple characters but I was pleasantly surprised by the graphical overhaul. And I was reminded how nice the story flows. Looking forward to more chapters!

I have to admit I haven't played this game in a long time (I think it just introduced a job system or something?) and every time I am thinking of starting it again, there is always another new shiny thing that distracts me from restarting minotaur hotel. So I am looking forward to the art update so that it finally convinces me to actually pick it up again.

that was a really cute to read. looking forward for more

I mean... He isn't supposed to be

I'm also stuck at that scene. Can't go anzwhere and am always redirected back to return the polisher

okay, thanks, I'll try it. I tried like 4-5 times already. But I guess I was mostly just unlucky

did you figure out if he can survive?

I am so confused, why is Rowan blaming himself for the situation when he was literally kidnapped and brought to his potential doom by the bandit whom he is traveling with right now. Wouldn't it make way more sense that he is blaming the bandit for literally everything because it is literally the bandit's fault?

finally got around to read this. The story took a turn I didn't expect. And I certainly didn't expect my eyes to tear up like that at the end

I do like the voice acting, it just seemed rather random to me which lines were voiced and which ones weren't. But it looks like you already have some ideas how to make it a bit more consistent.

what a fantastic read. I could spend way more hours just reading about how they learn each others' languages, mannerisms and cultures. Not to mention the crisp art, or the skillful writing abilities to evoke specific emotions.

Beautiful amazing story. I am happy I found this story.
But I have a little downer for you. I unlocked the best ending and I am not going back to read a lesser ending because George deserves the best and nothing less.

I hope your body will recover completely!

I really really really hope the story has a happy end. How much can a person endure.

I noticed no "name your own price" tag when downloading. This novel is just so good, I feel bad for reading it for free. So maybe consider accepting donations.

I discovered this story a few days ago and spend the last 3 days just breathing through the first two acts. It's emotional, and wholesome, but at the same time has intriguing mystery/thriller moments. I absolutely can't wait for the 3rd act! Amazing! You really know how to write emotions.

I would recommend instead of using the questionnaire to have a Google docs that patrons or everyone can edit, and you let them post all the typos there. Then everyone can see what has been suggested yet, and you have many people correcting each a few things.

I think that would help. And you can create a new page per chapter on the Google doc to make it even more accessible.

I know the English you use has issues, but you can still get the emotions across exceptionally well, so congrats to that already!