Hey man.
I respect the effort you've put into the game. the graphics and SFX are done really well, also the game concept and story narrative are nice.
Now I personally cannot enjoy these aspects when the writing is as cringy as it is, not to mention the absolute lack of character depth and the pacing of events. It's like they're all puppets waiting for my command with no will of their own, which obviously totally kills the immersion. The super power given is time warp, but apparently it's also +200 charm with a base charisma of +80. I'm speaking somewhat out of my arse, but you get what I'm saying.
Now in the end the most important thing is that you enjoy what you've created, but since you've shared it i think it honest to let you know that the games writing and character creation shows either no motivation to be creative, the inability to be creative, or lack of information on how people work outside of what you imagine.
The more I see this issue the more I feel pushed to do this myself, but that's a lot more work for my vision then it is for yours, you simply just need someone to write for you.
End of rant. There's probably a lot of work that I cannot see, so I want to restate the respect I have for the effort although being pretty rude with my opinion,
Tata
