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Good job and everything, I'm not good at praising. But I want to express my thanks by trying to be helpful. There is a minor detail, that could make your art significantly better (imho): Anatomy. The way you drew the shadows of the pubic bones (Os pubis), it looks like the vagina is where the symphysis would be. If you want to draw bodies, that look real, you have to know where the bones are. Artists usually learn a lot about anatomy, to be able to understand the shape of the body (skin over bones). So if that's something you want to get right, you could look up the pelvic anatomy, there are plenty of pictues online. Anyways good job, it's just something that I always noticed (with Yuna too). And I believe the art would look even sexier, if it was closer to a woman's actual anatomy.

Could it be, that you don't know much about human anatomy? The vaginal opening is not where the tentacle goes. It's not on the pubic mount, and the opening goes downward, not to the front. You made the tentacle go into her belly? That looks very wrong to me. The back tentacle goes into the place, where the vagina would be. Artists need to study lots of anatomy, if they want to get it right (skin over bone).

Edit: Thanks to everyone who pointed out my rudeness. I corrected my post and apologise. Sorry.

So far, there was no wake up meter for Kaede, which led me to believe, that she is very devot and actually into it/you. I think she even opens her eyes shortly when interacting with her and only pretends to be sleeping. She is happy to get any attention and doesn't mind to be used as fluffer or when you go back to the bed with yuna (she is so supportive lol). It would be hot, if there was a minigame around Kaede: Giving her pleasure, makes her moan, which in turn slowly wakes up Yuna. Head patting doesn't help, but letting her suck on a finger or gagging her otherwise could. She doesn't mind you doing whatever to her, but if you do it too much, she can't keep quiet and orgasms, or smth like that. Her (relationship-) progression Could be, that she feels more comfortable with letting you know that she is awake and horny for you. She might even start masturbating, after waking her up/turning her on, while you interact with Yuna, inviting you to do some more to her (opening mouth and sticking tongue out, spreading pussy, begging etc.).

I also hope, that you expand the reactions and facial expressions of the ladies to be not always the same and more nuanced. Seeing their tits wiggle while you do things is one thing, but for me it's hottest to see them feel the lust. (Remember feel the flash - Kasumi??) Seeing Kaede trying to deal with you pleasuring her, but it gets harder and harder until she is overwhelmed by lust would be sexy... even whispered dialogue could add a lot of excitement..

Great work. Best game I have ever seen ;) You might have this planned already. During the shower scene, there is 2x the option to endure. Right now it does nothing I am aware of. It should during blowjob trigger her to try harder or start sucking you. It should during sex cause her to come, when you endure long enough (5-10 times). There sould be progression in her answers, right now it seems as if smth. would happen, but her answers just loop.

Also during night, facial expressions, and reactions could be expanded imho. Give her dialogue, when she is awake pls. Option to hide under blanket if Kan comes, and try to make her come when he watches (and if she is awake, might respond to him like Can:"you good"her:"yes, you can leave""you sure, youre face is red?""y-yes please leave now *orgasms*", also will try to endure and complain later in cute fashion..). I hope you can eventually do more to her friend too. Make her watch, what you do to her. Also have them both in the same window would be cool -> make them sleep in same bed?
Just some thoughts. Cheers.