Update: I finished playing the game, and I was not disappointed. Having those checkpoints of needing the outfits to satisfy certain criteria in order to be acceptable was a very smart move to pace things better. I also liked how, after a certain point, not sure if it's outfit exposure, or the number of checkpoints you passed, girls started coming back with cum on them. But, only one cum splatter per girl, which I was a bit surprised about, given your usual material. I'd love to have seen them get more and more cum as time went on, somehow.
I'd love to see this expanded in some way. How, I'm not sure. Maybe just more outfits, different proportioned maids (maybe with separate dress codes for added difficulty), or a new game plus/hard mode where the maids move faster, or maybe the game doesn't pause (or just slows down) while you tell a maid what's wrong, since you can kinda "cheat" by checking for other maids' outfits while in that paused state. Not that that's a major issue as it is, though. But regardless, if you're at all inspired to do more with this after the game jam, I'd love to see it.