Congrats on finishing a game!
The biggest flaw in this game is that as a player, you are not doing anything most of the time. Saving your files should require more action on behalf of the player, or the time it takes to transfer files should be lower. Perhaps a slightly different spin where you have to find a specific file to save is more interesting?
The first playthrough was also rather confusing since there is no introduction or tutorial. On a more positive note, the art looks good (its just ashame you left the default blue unity background in the back).
