Kudos on the creativity! Cool music and overall vibe too! I'm most definitely not target audience since I don't like just reading all the time though, haha. So for me it was hard to maintain interest, also since I didn't really feel that anything happened if I sacrificed the wrong person. So if something could be done visually and introduce some kind of scene that plays out before chosing who to sacrifice, like "these three people had an argument, then X happens, then you get to judge who to sacrifice based on an event rather than just "I want to be rich". So you get the "good" feeling of when you're throwing Karen into the fire. Cause Karen was a ***** in that previous sequence, but Josh was the correct pick because your "boss" asked for someone good. To get some moral dilemmas in. Just an idea.