I really like how the story and world is laid out in this game, I think It could have used just a tad more work to connect everything together in the beginning but it is well structured. One thing I have a problem with is every room displaying the same dialogue over and over again after you choose an option and then come back, I think it would have felt less tedious if you only got the new room dialogue one time and then got the options right away instead of having to skip through the same room dialogue 5 times exploring in an area with a main room. Still a good game though and I could see the effort put into it, great work!