A cool little visual novel with interesting ideas. If you're looking for some quick ways to improve it, a prettier UI and some BGM would go a long way!
In addition, this is more of a personal feeling, but it'd be nice if you couldn't 'accidentally' skip forward if there's an option on screen.
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Thanks a lot for your feedback!
Sorry about the lack of music and visual refinement, had to skip many things just to get it out of the gate... but I will surely implement them once the edition becomes available again.
There are two types of options to select from, some are unskippable but others were meant to be optional (items and cards) so it was on purpose that you could skip them. But thanks to your feedback I've come to realize that they are indeed too easy to skip and it would be better to do as you say (I would also like to add the option to go back on the dialogue).
So thanks again for your words and your time, they mean a lot to me!