I liked the visuals and sound, great job. Story wise, I had hoped to get a better sense of the characters and their situation. While we are told a lot, I have to take it on faith that the info Kerrigan gets is impactful. That said, you did manage to pack a lot in for the time we had to do this!
Whereas, I would really like to have the satisfaction of *realizing* for myself that something is a huge deal (e.g., the last name Kerrigan discovered).
But I realize the world is just being set up, and you've started a lot of threads that are likely to weave a great tapestry. The oneiromancy factor would be a big draw for me, so I was a little disappointed not to see that aspect of the case. But again, you packed in a lot for the time we have!
P.S. I beg your finest pardon for that "when Michigan still existed" bit. As a lifelong resident, I both laughed and wanted to find out what happened to good old Michigan. A nice touch!